I am a Year 6 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, May 27, 2019
Crash they went onto the hill as they raced. The riders held on tight as they raced.the racers can see the dust in there face and hear the loud engine.the riders can smell the sticky dirt and they can taste the yucky sweat in there mouth.thinking who while will win as they are raising and feeling nervous saying am I going to win this.maybe they can feel the dust.I hope the yellow wins.
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