the cloud looks like a dragon what's going into the fire.the fire looks like a fox eating the lightning.the tornado looks like a ball bouncing on the fire.people nearby can smell the burning fire.they can hear the tornado woshing around.the people nearby can smell the fire and ash and feel the wind and heat on their skin. They can taste the dust in their mouth and they would be thinking woah that's beautiful but they’d also be running away.everyone would be so scared.
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Showing posts with label 2019 writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2019 writing. Show all posts
Friday, November 1, 2019
the cloud looks like a dragon what's going into the fire.the fire looks like a fox eating the lightning.the tornado looks like a ball bouncing on the fire.people nearby can smell the burning fire.they can hear the tornado woshing around.the people nearby can smell the fire and ash and feel the wind and heat on their skin. They can taste the dust in their mouth and they would be thinking woah that's beautiful but they’d also be running away.everyone would be so scared.
Thursday, May 30, 2019
Snap the jaws of a tremendous crocodile hooked on to the boat.the man can see the colossal crocodile as he heard a snap.smelling a bulky crocodile and feeling the fresh air while the man can taste sweet while thinking am I going to escape the enormous crocodile.being terrified saying I need to escape the hefty crocodile in the lake.
Monday, May 27, 2019
Crash they went onto the hill as they raced. The riders held on tight as they raced.the racers can see the dust in there face and hear the loud engine.the riders can smell the sticky dirt and they can taste the yucky sweat in there mouth.thinking who while will win as they are raising and feeling nervous saying am I going to win this.maybe they can feel the dust.I hope the yellow wins.
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