I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, February 12, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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you did good whick
ReplyDeleteHi Lennox! how did you move your character like that at the start? maybe next time add more slides so the story continues.
ReplyDeleteHello there Lennox! I am Tyler from South Hornby School. I really like how your character actually MOVED on the first slide! That was really cool! Maybe you should add more slides? BYE!
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